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end of me
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:40:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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the sunset doesn't seem as beautiful
without the reflection of your golden hair in the horizon
have you grown as tired of living as i have?
your response is quick and i can't help but laugh
the dark has all but consumed me
but i shift my eyes to the east
knowing i will see the sun again
you take me in your arms
and the warm air of your breath
falls gently on my shoulder
you asks if its consuming
and i can only respond with four words
"it hasn't set me free"
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2004-06-10 11:40:13]
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Re: end of me
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:57:37 AM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: end of me
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by Drowning-in-light on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 01:34:28 PM AEST
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| I really enjoy the mental picture this gives me....... |
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Re: end of me
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by Ethereal_Engine on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:03:47 PM AEST
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| The peom seems to be about a loss of some kind. There are days when things arn't so good and you're sick of the repetition or feel like something is off or missing. I know the feeling well, but as the cheezy catch phrase goes "life goes on" go forth and and try to at least have a little fun..worlds can end but they also can be created afresh. This was sad and filled with emotion, nice writing. Thanks for your comment/review of Flow of Bliss. |
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