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You and I
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:35:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the moon dies out
the stars cease to sparkle
the world is dead
you and i
were here once before
we viewed our land
with hate and disust
now we are gone
and took it with us
you and i
were loved and
hated by all
we all had feelings
now we have none
even our memories
have disappeared into
thin air
our thoughts and
minds are lost
in an endless space
never to be found
for you and i
are now gone.
Copyright ©
MDodgen
... [
2004-06-10 11:35:07]
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Re: You and I
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by lexxie on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:38:17 AM AEST
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wonderful poem im so sorry you feel that way great emotion loved it
bye bye
lexxie |
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Re: You and I
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by screwup on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:06:57 PM AEST
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| I loved it... shows great emotion. It also reminds me of my ex. :( |
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Re: You and I
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by KSUHO11 on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:42:59 PM AEST
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| It is sad, but very well written end emotional, well done. |
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Re: You and I
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:43:53 PM AEST
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| I know the feeling. sometimes the hurt doesnt fully go away.... another good poem A+++ |
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