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Shine with me
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:26:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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chocolate and ice
the passion inside
your flesh and blood
lay with me
shine with me
on rivers of deceit
pluck out my flowers
and slice out my love
rip my insides apart
please only yourself
i seek shelter in your shadow
and hope in your dreams
pluck out my seeds
sale price is too low
sweeten my darkness
and i'll empty myself whole
as for you,
my blessed little stone,
this flower is too dirty
and rotten to hold.
Copyright ©
MDodgen
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2004-06-10 11:26:43]
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Re: Shine with me
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by lexxie on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:41:10 AM AEST
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agian wonderful poem great emotion im so sorry you feel that way i wish you the best of luck aigan beautiful poem
bye bye
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Re: Shine with me
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by screwup on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:36:12 PM AEST
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| I love this poem... It is so dark. Thats what I love about it. |
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