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Edge of Eternity
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:01:39 AM in AEST
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DreamsandWishes
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Meet me at the edge of eternity
Where nothing matters but you and me
I’ll be waiting there long before
Daring to knock on forever’s door
Show me that you’re strong enough
Escape from time, call my bluff
But love, if you cannot promise this
I’ll leave you with an earthly kiss
Carry on then! But keep my heart
It will be yours though we’re apart
You’ve had it for so very long
It's grown accustomed to being strong
Safely tucked in next to yours
It will not leave the one it adores
Keep it then! I’ve given it up
I don’t need it now that I’ve grown up
I trust you to carry it with you now
And hope that one day, somehow
You’ll meet me at the edge of eternity
And bring my heart back home to me
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Silent-No-More
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2004-06-10 11:01:39]
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Re: Edge of Eternity
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by MDodgen on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:30:44 AM AEST
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| beautiful poem. i love the image of "meeting on the edge of eternity". great job again. |
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Re: Edge of Eternity
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:04:57 PM AEST
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| wow..wonderful write. great image and expression..your such a great writer. everything i read from you is amazing. |
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Re: Edge of Eternity
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by hooray_its_jen on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:12:58 PM AEST
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That was truly amazing. I am seriously speechless. Very nive write!
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Re: Edge of Eternity
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by hooray_its_jen on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:14:56 PM AEST
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That up there is supposed to be a C instead of a V. It should say nice instead of nive....just to let you know. *wink!*
~Jenna |
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Re: Edge of Eternity
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 01:38:51 PM AEST
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I have felt this kind of connection. You describe it well.
Stitch |
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Re: Edge of Eternity
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:00:39 PM AEST
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I believe that all true loves will reside in eternity. That is where I want to be with my love when we are together again. This is so beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.
Hugs,
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Re: Edge of Eternity
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by brigitte7735 on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:20:33 PM AEST
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Totally and completely...
On the edge of eternity....god im amazed
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Re: Edge of Eternity
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:16:48 PM AEST
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Aha! Your last comment on my premium submission had me wondering a bit . . . lol.
Now i've read this, It all seems clear.
Aside from the fact that you write consistent rhythmic beauty and portray lovely thoughts with emotions - it's an uncannily good work with an uncanny happenstance.
An intriguing write . . . |
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Re: Edge of Eternity
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:38:16 PM AEST
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Daring to knock on forever’s door-- hmmmm this is a deep line. I like the daring part of it....
touching and sad at the same time. you know how I like it , just like this... great A++++ |
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Re: Edge of Eternity
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 05:23:06 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Pure and simple. And Perfectly written. SNM, You are quite the poetess.
Lindsey |
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Re: Edge of Eternity
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:25:01 AM AEST
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absolutely a gorgeous beautifully written poem, my new favorite of yours, just read it once more and must say it is perfection from title to enchantingly lovely last line:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Edge of Eternity
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 07:14:40 PM AEST
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Awesome, awesome, awesome. I feel like this is one of the best poems I have ever read....but...then again, I haven't read all of your poems yet now have I? While I'm not the most fond at making comparisons....and true, all of your writing is so beautifully inspirational, this one seems to be standing out in the crowd.
Timmy
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