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Wishin'
Contributed by
S_K_Williamson
on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 02:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The sun comes up
in orange, crimson and gold
I'm sittin' here watching
ignoring the cold
I let my mind wander
yes...there you are
Really no surprise
'cause you're never far
I lay back...
watch the colors spread around
Wishin' you were with me
laying here on the ground
I'd wrap my arms around you
look up into your face
Whisper words of love
here in this magic place
The colors are dispersing
guess it's time for me to go
I'll be back to sit and watch
when the sun is getting low
Copyright ©
S_K_Williamson
... [
2002-10-15 14:45:00]
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Re: Wishin'
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by Suzy on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 02:48:03 PM AEST
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| Beautiful... |
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Re: Wishin'
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by Emmie74 on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 03:01:16 PM AEST
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| ...Amazing.... Dreams sometimes do come true. |
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Re: Wishin'
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by Justice3310 on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 03:57:38 PM AEST
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| beautiful thats all there is to say.............. |
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Re: Wishin'
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 09:35:14 PM AEST
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Such a feeling of tranquillity after reading this. Beautiful poem..
Jenni |
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Re: Wishin'
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 12:57:56 AM AEST
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| lovely poem. Nice to be with such a mind if only for a minute or two......no that's not quite got it, you will linger i know |
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Re: Wishin'
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 03:21:21 PM AEST
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sharon i don't know how i missed this beautiful write! as always i love your poetry and this piece is stunning:)
hugs, woofies n' love nessa |
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