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A new solution
Contributed by
movax
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:52:07 AM in AEST
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God, what has this world come to
Evil around, there seems nothing we can do,
Rather than be at the wrath of this hate
A new solution we must create
Rambling around inside my mind
Do any answers enter my head?
My own being is trapped in a bind
Clearly we have to fight this dread
Clarity is something we need to use
And hope to utilise it to fight this abuse,
Really we'd better not go hide and cry
Trembling together, waiting to die
Hellish hounds have haunted us in the past
Yet the power of God will help us at last!
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movax
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2004-06-10 08:52:07]
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Re: A new solution
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by eatfresh22 on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 10:49:56 AM AEST
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This was good. Optimistic ending! I can relate to this a lot. Sometimes it is tempting to just go run and hide. Encouraging!
~Carrie~ |
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Re: A new solution
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by coldestflame on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:56:43 AM AEST
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| hmm.. nice read.. i supps we oughtta b thankful fer the happy endin lol.. tc ..g |
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