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Until I want me too
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 06:12:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I can’t concentrate
I’m finding it hard to breathe
I never meant for this to happen
I wish that you would leave
So can I just say a thousand thank yous?
I never met anyone like you before
I never meant to be this way
It’s just that I don’t want me anymore
You taught me how to breathe again
I never felt so alive
But I don’t know how to live
I don’t know what it is to cry
So here is where I say goodbye
I’m scared I’ll hurt you more
I never meant to be so afraid
I don’t know how to want me anymore
I don’t deserve the things you say
Or everything you do for me
But how can I show you love
When I don’t know how it is to be…
So here I am, I’m letting go
Stupidly of everything you helped me live through
I’m sorry, but I’ll never want you
Until I learn to want me too.
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2004-06-10 06:12:41]
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Re: Until I want me too
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 07:22:55 AM AEST
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| so sad...don't let go...don't you see, you have a beautiful soul... |
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Re: Until I want me too
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by RockNwhls on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 09:06:41 AM AEST
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| wow.......wonderfully written, touched a cord. |
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Re: Until I want me too
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by hannahbanana on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 09:19:31 AM AEST
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| great poem |
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Re: Until I want me too
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by AdamChantell on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 08:10:59 PM AEST
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| once again... a another great write... i seem to relate to this one very well. starting to bring back some memories... hehe thanks for the inspiration |
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