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ETERNAL SADNESS
Contributed by
frejya
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:40:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Too small is the room
In my body and mind
There is infinity of sadness, loneliness, grief, misery, despair
Worse than the worst somewhere
Where will my glee be?
That bliss I miss and all I see
I'm moving through that time
When even shadows feel lonely
And all that I fill rushes up to me
Like one emotion I cant face
But I go through again and agian
With my head down
And when even despair dies
The senses fade, the soul cries
How to ease this lasting pain?
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frejya
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2004-06-10 02:40:01]
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Re: ETERNAL SADNESS
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:56:20 AM AEST
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I like this. It's similar to one I wrote, too. I like how it ends with a question.
Grief like this can be very hard. Thhe only answer I can give is, follow the Light. There's grief in doing so, but the life comes back.
Blessings
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Re: ETERNAL SADNESS
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:11:54 AM AEST
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Sadness and pain can be so exhausting... Very well written...
Strength to you!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: ETERNAL SADNESS
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:33:39 PM AEST
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LIFE CAN SUCK FOR EVERYONE! BUT IT DOESN'T HAVE TO FOR YOU!! LOOK UP & REACH FOR YOUR DREAMS,HOLD ONTO THEM SO YOU'LL BELIEVE!! LOSERS WANNA LEAVE,BUT WINNERS ARE THE ONES WHO STAY!!! YOU CAN'T TELL ME YOU DON"T HAVE THE HEART OF A REAL CHAMPION!!!! MOVING POEM & AN HONEST PLEA,I LIKED IT ALOT FREJYA!!!!!
LOL~DAN!!!!!!
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