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Rope hands
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 01:53:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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numb mind
tired eyes
waiting for
silent sighs
walls closing
fears grow
my horror
doesnt show
no spine
Im weak
only tremble
cant speak
neck tied
rope hands
deaths touch
seems grand
standing high
bucket feet
spent life
being beat
gently rocking
forth back
pushing myself
cant holdback
I gotta
do it
cant handle
this *****
no more
you me
bucket kicked
swaying free
final breath
sweet release
dont cry
now please
rope hands
soft grip
death sleep
slowly slip
I wish
you'd stare
see me
hanging there
know that
you're why
I had
to die
Copyright ©
holderofthestone
... [
2004-06-10 01:53:58]
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Re: Rope hands
(User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:17:29 AM AEST
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Good write. Your words haunt me...
Strength to you!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Rope hands
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by evilfairy on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:30:48 AM AEST
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Worrying but excellent - again!
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Re: Rope hands
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 07:37:36 AM AEST
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| stunning...i love this...amazing...wow... |
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Re: Rope hands
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by MDodgen on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:09:05 PM AEST
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| your words leave me speechless. beautiful job. |
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Re: Rope hands
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by Saitou-sama on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 01:37:38 PM AEST
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| The rhythm and rhyming were excellent. I could barely breathe while reading it. |
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Re: Rope hands
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:44:04 AM AEST
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wow, very sad...very emotional...I liked it very much...great write...
much love,
Dani |
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