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Thoughts Of You
Contributed by
Savannah
on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It starts slowly
Your name written on a piece of paper
A flash of brown hair
That looks just like yours
A whif of a scent
That causes me to look for you
Even though you're never there
Then they all start to unravel
All the thoughts of you
Like string from a tapestry of pain
I think of your hug
Your arms tight around me
My chest against yours
I think of your smile
Your teeth flashing against your skin
My lips smiling along with you
I think of your laugh
Your reminder of the laze that surrounds you
My laugh filling the air your laugh left open
They all pour out
All the thoughts of you
Like the tears that I cried
Just thinking
All the thoughts of you
Copyright ©
Savannah
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2002-10-15 13:45:00]
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 02:19:51 PM AEST
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I loved this...and can identify...
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by Justice3310 on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 03:54:43 PM AEST
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that was beatiful i have found the more you write and get your feelings out the easier it gets good luck you just never now though.....
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by Arwen on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 09:24:20 AM AEST
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| such a small world we live in...i mean u live in the USA and me, in South Africa but I feel I know you already. i guess being human links us in some way :) we're all wayyyy too emotional *lol* I can sooo identify with your feelings in this poem. Been there...done that...got the memories to prove it. I still wonder how little unexpectated things stick in our heads...especially when they have to do with some special guy. Your poem was absolutely beautiful savannah. look forward to reading more of ur stuff :)) |
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