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Contributed by
HellsLibrarian
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:24:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You ask me
what I want
and I say
many things
but
what I really want. . .
a friendly face in a
crowded room of angry stares
a tender voice in a
raging sea of harsh curses
a strong shoulder to support me
when I’m spent and weary
a sturdy shoulder to cry on
when I’ve no more strength to bear
someone to cuddle me
when I feel all warm and sleepy
someone to hold me
when I’m feeling small and weak
a soft kiss and a quiet sigh
at each parting
a beloved companion to miss me
when I’m gone
someone to laugh and dance and play with
quirky and mischievous
someone to live and learn and dream with
patient and tear-worthy
. . . you
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2004-06-10 00:24:13]
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Re: You
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by Drowning-in-light on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:33:15 AM AEST
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| I love that feeling.....I think you captured it in words. |
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Re: You
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by positivelypurple on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 01:00:23 AM AEST
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| I think it's what we all want. Thank you for sharing...it was lovely. |
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Re: You
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by rugby_player on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:01:47 AM AEST
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| Hey good job...showed some good feelings..... |
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Re: You
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by thumper on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:31:50 AM AEST
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You have a real talent for writing. This was so sweet. And, really, this is just about all we want. :o) Nice sentiment. Write on!
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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