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show me how
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:30:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I try to embrace you
you push me away
when I try to speak
theres no words to say
you dont want to listen
you dont want to see
you cant understand
what you mean to me
I cant live without you
but you wont live with me
the only thing I want
is you and me to be
just to hold you tight
caress your silken skin
Id love to kiss you lips
and many other sins
your just out of reach
yet so close at hand
to not know your love
no longer can I stand
I need to hold your heart
I wished you'd love me now
if theres a way to your heart
I pray you show me how
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2004-06-09 23:30:30]
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Re: show me how
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by HellsLibrarian on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:52:09 PM AEST
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| I can easily symapthize with this emotion. I liked this poem. |
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Re: show me how
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by MDodgen on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:10:56 PM AEST
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| sad beautiful poem, i just hope you don't really feel like this. someone out there loves you a hell of a lot, just remember that. |
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Re: show me how
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:42:49 AM AEST
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This is such a recognizable feeling and you brought this emotion to words in a touching way.
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: show me how
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:11:47 AM AEST
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wow, that was very beautiful....greatly written...I loved it...it was so much feeling and emotion...it was an awesomly written piece...I loved it...
great write,
Dani
xoxoxo |
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Re: show me how
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:28:57 AM AEST
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Very touching. Again beautiful sweet but sad sentiments that well up in the heart, very moving. A true master-piece!
Corinna |
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Re: show me how
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by Calista on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:49:21 PM AEST
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gooooooood job on this one, like all your others i particularly loved this one because its about a feeling everyone has and yet you put your own touch on it and made it different. excellente
~Calista |
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Re: show me how
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 08:56:17 AM AEST
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| i can relate to this poem very well i,v been throught the same sort of thing very confusing i guess but wont knocks yah down make syah stronger x |
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