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WE WILL BE KNOWN BY THE TRACKS WE LEAVE BEHIND
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:09:41 PM in AEST
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"We will be known by the tracks we leave behind"...Lakota Proverb
O' Great Spirit on High
Guide us through Your day.
The day you created for us, here on Mother Earth.
When you opened the windows of Your Sun,
and brought forth light.
When the shadow of the Moon created the night.
Help us leave tracks behind that we know will say........
O' Great Spirit, we know you created all things for us.
We love your creatures, and in your splendid way,
help us to find our trail here below.......
Leaving tracks behind that never mistreated another living soul!
May our tracks that we leave behind be light and tender.....
Give us the courage of your Great Black Bear.
Who wanders alone, here on this earthly terrain.....
Unafraid, unintimidated, standing tall,
standing strong with your Great Aid!
And lest we n'er forget O' Great Father of all Life,
May we leave tracks behind, so others may follow
and see our rebirth.
An appreciation of what you gave,
Never wasted just to be saved!
You trusted us, and placed all your creations under our feet.
Your Magnificent, Majestic Mountains we look high to see.
Waterfalls and rippling stream.
Jumping Rainbow Trout, all about.
Your visions of all things green.
Nature's Soothing Scene.....
We know you are here with us now.
For proof of your presence is all around us.
Everywhere we look it's You we see!
Rams on a steep rocky precipice....
Or a newborn fawn protected underneath Your tree.
May the tracks you left behind for us O' Father of the Sun and Moon.
Show us Your Plan.......help us to understand.
And finally Great One of the Skies....
Help us show in our last tracks as we leave them behind......
that we followed your plan......
That we loved your land.........
Let us leave tracks behind that are pronounced,
Everything accomplished in Your Time. O' Magnificent One!
After we have followed Your Trail......
May our tracks leave behind Your Message...
Saying "Well Done!"
This is Big Bear speaking...........to You.
Created by
Lovingcritters is my Indian name because I
have 5 dogs, and love all creatures small and tall, wild or tame.............
ConSue
August 2003
"A message for the Great
Spirit from me.......
"Well Done, O' Great One!"
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This was a repost for all the new ones on the site........Welcome to YPDC......You will love it here........just you wait and see!
"Welcome Smiles"
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Re: WE WILL BE KNOWN BY THE TRACKS WE LEAVE BEHIND
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:27:27 PM AEST
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this is beautiful Conni I loved it the first time and the second time lol
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Re: WE WILL BE KNOWN BY THE TRACKS WE LEAVE BEHIND
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:04:33 PM AEST
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| Always a treasure to read this! Loved it then & Now! Christina |
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by venkat on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:22:07 AM AEST
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| very beautiful prayer..pure, prestine and lovely. :-) venkat |
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Re: WE WILL BE KNOWN BY THE TRACKS WE LEAVE BEHIND
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by emystar on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:13:25 AM AEST
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Veery good Mom. Our ancesters are very proud of the legacy u r preserving.
Job well done.
luv, huggs,
your brat
emy |
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Re: WE WILL BE KNOWN BY THE TRACKS WE LEAVE BEHIND
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:22:44 AM AEST
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EXCELLENT & SO WELL FELT! I'M AN 1/8
INDIAN MYSELF & THAT'S ANOTHER REASON WHY I LOVED THIS ONE!! YOU SURE DO HAVE A GIFT WHEN IT COMES TO POETRY!!! EVEN THOUGH I'M ONLY 1/8 OF AN INDIAN ~ 100% OF ME THANKS YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!!
LOL~DAN!!!!! |
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Re: WE WILL BE KNOWN BY THE TRACKS WE LEAVE BEHIND
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 06:28:59 AM AEST
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still a wonderful message
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Re: WE WILL BE KNOWN BY THE TRACKS WE LEAVE BEHIND
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:10:34 PM AEST
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The spirit is still strong and they are not forgotten. A beautiful legacy our forefathers left for us to cherish and respect. Great write.
Love,
Rita |
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Re: WE WILL BE KNOWN BY THE TRACKS WE LEAVE BEHIND
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:12:02 PM AEST
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this is beautiful connie, my hubby was blackfoot lakota sioux, so it was very special for me to read:) thanks, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: WE WILL BE KNOWN BY THE TRACKS WE LEAVE BEHIND
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by jay89 on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 09:29:27 PM AEST
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| i loved it!!!!! |
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