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~ Let me breathe ~
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:59:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sometimes it’s hard to breathe
When the anxiety wells within me
When I feel like you’ve closed the door
On all I seem to live for
All I need is a mere word
To show that my fears have been heard
And you’ve not mistook the meaning
Of the confused emotions I am feeling
It can be like a cloud lifted away
If they’re tender, the words that you say
And that smile you can suddenly show me
That reaches inside me and sets my soul free
MW April 2004
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Re: ~ Let me breathe ~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:28:01 PM AEST
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| Nice job - |
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Re: ~ Let me breathe ~
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by Pyrochick on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:46:57 PM AEST
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very good.
~kat lat-rz~ |
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Re: ~ Let me breathe ~
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by Joker17 on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:53:14 PM AEST
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I can relate, well said, well written. That's my situation. I hope things will get better for all of us, so we can write some happy poetry again. I miss that...
I really liked this one. |
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Re: ~ Let me breathe ~
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:46:41 PM AEST
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yes, all it can take is one word from the right person, sweet poem; may you always be happy and free in your soul:) hugs n' love nessa
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