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Living hell
Contributed by
WaitingToBeFound
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Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:53:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You lied to me, so i lied to you
You cheated twice, so i cheated too.
The gun looks kinda friendly now, oops it's pointing at you.
Should i do it?
Yes i should
forever RIP
Bam
Now your gone, should i go to? You made my life a living hell, now you can be there too.
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WaitingToBeFound
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2004-06-09 18:53:52]
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Re: Living hell
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by RhythmBndt on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:08:50 PM AEST
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| Niiiccee. I think everyone can relate to that as far as bad days esp. if anyone has parental arguments. |
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Re: Living hell
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:29:21 PM AEST
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| Fun clever expression. Obviously a deeper subject, but you handled in a lively way |
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Re: Living hell
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by poemwritingdude on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:50:39 PM AEST
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| i like the words in this poem, such a sensitive and angry subject handled in a light tone in some parts, heavy in others. nice job |
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