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Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 05:54:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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why dose this life decive me
cast an ugly look across my face
showing me how wrong i have forsaken
all of this being pushed and shoved around
just seems to pull life out of me each and every day
easeing the blood from my skin in slow painful drops
scarring me ever deeper into my very core
breath is wasted in my lungs
shall i hold it off for the rest of the worthy to take in
i hold my breath and count past ten
hearing my heart pounding in my ears
i turn purple and fall to the floor
no one sees me as i slowly slip away
fall into my hopeless darkness
forever in to the place i now call home
into death my new home.
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TwEeK
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2004-06-09 17:54:48]
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Re: Home
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by moon_light on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:13:59 PM AEST
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| good wright but, you must loose thoughs feallings nothing inlife is worth deth |
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Re: Home
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:47:55 PM AEST
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| Not to sure how old you are, but death is no cure for pain, it only brings tears to those who love you, and I know there are many, write some happy things, life is very short, take care Val |
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Re: Home
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by pixie on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 12:12:23 PM AEST
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tragic and deep poem here, sorry you feel like this. well written
pixie xx |
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