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this girl this boy
Contributed by
hannahbanana
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 05:43:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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this boy
he says
inside out
upside down
lollipops balloons
magic doors and fairy dust
this girl
she says
you're wrong
young man
if you think
you think too much
about me
and feign belief
and knowledge of me and i
lollipops balloons
magic doors and fairy dust
under the bed
to awake every morning
with thoughts
of this boy
inside out
upside down
cars sport
sex and breasts
and her
all grown up and beautiful
this girl
this boy
this crazy thing called love.
Copyright ©
hannahbanana
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2004-06-09 17:43:25]
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Re: this girl this boy
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by RhythmBndt on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 05:57:30 PM AEST
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| *APPLAUDS* Great poem :) |
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Re: this girl this boy
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by moon_light on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:41:31 PM AEST
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| great job i love this poam i just read it over and over agein. |
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Re: this girl this boy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:36:31 PM AEST
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| This was alright - I liked the imagery and simple language. |
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Re: this girl this boy
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 08:40:24 PM AEST
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| really liked this one hannah! great job |
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Re: this girl this boy
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 09:04:11 PM AEST
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| I Like |
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