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Flying Darkness
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 05:10:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I ride on
I ride on
jet black wings,
soaked in crimson blood.
My wailing cry
spreads and creates
morbidity and decay.
People slay each other
at the sight of me,
they breath the breath of
death at my scent.
I glide over them,
twirling in sorrowful,
shadowless obscurity.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-06-09 17:10:21]
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Re: Flying Darkness
(User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 05:20:15 PM AEST
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| Sounds like some personification but in reverse. Giving a person the charateristics of a bird. Slick idea :) Great poem. |
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Re: Flying Darkness
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:57:18 AM AEST
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| It was cool kinda, short but good. Nice work. Peace out. |
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