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death knell (october 14)
Contributed by
Blue
on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 12:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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death is calling
tears are falling
friends forgot me
no one's taught me
how to love this face i see
ugly girl of hate and grief
hands are shaking
heart is aching
smile faking
my soul's breaking
tears on cheeks will always stain
memories of loss and pain
there's no life
there is the knife
angry words
they only hurt
you lied to me when you said "you see
closest friends we'll always be."
nothing won nothing to gain
tears on cheeks will always stain
Copyright ©
Blue
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2002-10-15 12:15:00]
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Re: death knell (october 14)
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 11:09:16 PM AEST
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| Things will get better... don't worry.. just keep writing and letting it out like you just did here and you'll be fine... good write Blue... |
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Re: death knell (october 14)
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by Knowledge on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 08:40:13 AM AEST
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Lovely write. I'm sorry that this happened to you. I know how you feel. Keep venting. Keep writing, and you should be fine.
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