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Dali
Contributed by
Ina
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:16:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Desert
sand turn to semen
naked frozen women
Renaissance bodies
shadows hiding
behind their flesh
clinging to the horizon
arms reaching for eternity
grasping time
dripping down
my shoes
the sky falls through
a hole
in the ground
a stool for my brain
please.
Copyright ©
Ina
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2004-06-09 15:16:00]
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Re: Dali
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by reilt on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 05:23:02 PM AEST
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| wonderful...another extraordinary piece of writing* |
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Re: Dali
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by MDodgen on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:24:42 AM AEST
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| very abstract and surreal. wonderful imagery. i loved it, good job. |
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Re: Dali
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:28:33 PM AEST
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| yes, surreal just like Dali's paintings. He was my very first favorite artist. |
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