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Everyone Has A Story..
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:13:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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everyone has thier story
hidden deep inside
if u take the time to
know a stranger
you'd discover things
they hide
every person has a talent
some dont let it show
eachone u just have to
dig deep inside to kno
every person has thier faults
some visible to the eye
some invisible but still
lie down deep inside
for example take that popular
girl that every girl wants to be
outside she seems happy and carefree
but deep down inside shes
created her own rivalry
take that boy that sits alone
and always reads his books
deep down inside he's such
a great guy
so sweet and well mannered
now take the class nerd
get to know them
are they really that bad?
take that gorgeous guy
the one every girl wished
they had, talk to him and
you might as well be talkin
to a wall
hes concited and mean
the looks dont mean nothing at all
take that quite girl
that hangs out wit ur crowd
but rarely talks
get to know her, take her for
a walk
so many ideas built up inside
all they need is a chance
becuase thier so shy
now take the class jock
the one who seems hes got
everything
the girls, the looks
but you would find out more
if u would take a 2nd look
take that person you've
misjudged
get to know them with
friendliness
and some love
take that person by the hand
let them kno u understand
take a kid
any kid
Stephen,
Caitlin,
Cory
becuase deep down inside
everyone
has a
*STORY*
Copyright ©
xxbreathlessx
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2004-06-09 15:13:11]
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Re: Everyone Has A Story..
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:41:58 PM AEST
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You did such a wonderful job getting this truth across, loved the flow and the use of your words.
Blessings
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Re: Everyone Has A Story..
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by Kie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:12:33 PM AEST
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So wise and right you are!
I loved your poem and the only minor changes that would make it better would be with your spelling. If you fixed that you would have an incredible poem.
Everyone does have a story and often we forget this and you have given me food for thought. I want to remember to take the time to get to know people. Your poem has reminded me.
Well done.
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