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Alone
Contributed by
Geykya
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 02:30:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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alone in my heart
alone in this sea
alone in my house
alone as i'm me
alone with my laughter
alone with my pain
alone with this feeling
alone in the rain
alone with my heartache
alone with my life
alone with my death
alone with my knife
Copyright ©
Geykya
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2004-06-09 14:30:35]
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Re: Alone
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 02:31:50 PM AEST
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| sad but great write. |
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Re: Alone
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 02:38:21 PM AEST
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| dang....... good write.. now turn around and throw knife into the sea.. sandy |
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Re: Alone
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by Saitou-sama on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 01:39:27 PM AEST
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| The third stanza was my favorite. Throughout most if it, it seems just like a bad day or something, but the last line sums it all up and gives it that morbid twist. Great job. |
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