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The Hunt of Brothers
Contributed by
InexactExactness
on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 11:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A new dawn begins
another one found dead
So much life in this one
now dripping from his breast
The hunt accompanies the morning
on horseback we shall ride
into the darkness of the forest
We shall kill it where it lies
Distress brings in the night
as the fires are now set
Blinded by what we cannot see
though our souls not worried yet
Soon it's time to rest
and wait for the waking to come
Hopefully we'll be left
Our first day here now is done
A new morning brings in hope
all men accounted for
The hunt shall now resume
as the sun opens our door
We search the countryside
wandering around for clues
Then it greets us finally
and we fear that we shall lose
So large the beating heart
so vulnerable, and so frail
That is it's true weakness
My hammer shall beat it's nail
My men now are badly beaten
as their souls relinquished north
But I shall defeat this monster
with the revenge that I have stored
I'm glad it's soon to be over
with one hit it shall be done
As the heart of this beast has stopped
it's body it is ripped from
The pain is now all over
for the people who have now passed
The breeze breathes cool winds of change
and death is an outcast
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Re: The Hunt of Brothers
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by inad on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 05:01:37 AM AEST
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| This is very inspireing.. I really liked it. |
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Re: The Hunt of Brothers
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by Lia on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 01:26:30 AM AEST
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| OOooooOOOOOoohhhh very good ! |
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Re: The Hunt of Brothers
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 03:36:53 PM AEST
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I'm going to have to watch this movie now....this was sooo good and how the revenge of what they wanted they did receive...ahh i liked this one alot ...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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