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Broken Strings
Contributed by
Soulless
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:52:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You think I’ve forgotten
All those things you’ve done to me
They don’t grow rotten
Nor do they fly away
Freshly picked from my memory
Your smiles won’t ease me so quickly
Chorus:
When your heart dies away
And what tiny conscience left is flooded
With thoughts of me
I’ll smile and you’ll see
You can’t control me so easily
I see
You’ve come to blind me from what surrounds me
Screaming and yelling and hurting then healing
I’m not foreign to this tormenting
You slowly pick me away
Eventually leave me with nothing
I wont save your sweet whispering
CHORUS
You wont drag me into your spells
Bound by ups and downs
We’ll take a walk in my memory lane
Walk until your conscience is drowned
Until your screaming my name
Until your screaming to me
I’m sorry
Copyright ©
Soulless
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2004-06-09 13:52:23]
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Re: Broken Strings
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:59:01 PM AEST
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| wow! amazing write. i would love to hear this song ....in a linkin park type way..you know what i mean? this was great ..i can almost hear it being song with the music and all.. |
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Re: Broken Strings
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by TheRaven on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 02:35:02 PM AEST
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| awesome song...i agree, i would love to hear this with the music. great write keep it up |
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Re: Broken Strings
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:04:03 PM AEST
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You're a wonderful song writer.
Good job here. |
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Re: Broken Strings
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:33:13 PM AEST
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wow great poem there I hope u can forgive but never forget.
Bobo (Joel) |
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