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NEED SOME PLACE TO LIVE
Contributed by
frejya
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Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 12:14:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Hard, I find, it is to find
A private hiding corner to cry
This pinch I want away since birth
Is too much to even try
Sobbing silently and so careful
Not to let my pain out aloud
Can't cry musical rivers
Me helpless, lonely in this crowd
They tore apart the heartbroken
Hurt like always and again,
Always and again I thought I knew
But knew now the real pain
Pains now true, complains true too
Fate expects something else somehow
No tools I have to fight my doom
Am I afraid of death, still, now?
Im so mixed up and so scattered
I need no one to heed my call
So lonely me let me not break
No place I have for my pieces to fall.
Copyright ©
frejya
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2004-06-09 12:14:32]
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Re: NEED SOME PLACE TO LIVE
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 12:18:15 PM AEST
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Awwww this is a sad one, but very well written
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Re: NEED SOME PLACE TO LIVE
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:42:39 PM AEST
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TOUCH YOUR HEART & THAT'S WHERE THE LOVE WILL START! NOTHING ENDS WHEN YOU HAVE A FRIEND!! DESTINY IS A DARE W/O ANY TO SPARE!!! SO YOU DON'T HAVE TO CRY JUST GIVE IT A TRY!!!! YOU'VE GOT THE STRENGTH OF A 1,000 HEARTS TO LAST YOU ENDLESS LENGTHS!!!!! YOU CAN DO IT GIRL!!!!!! THE POEM WAS AWESOME,SAD BUT KICK ASS FREJYA!!!!!!!
LOL~DAN!!!!!!!! |
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