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Me Alone
Contributed by
MDodgen
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Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:54:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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lost ideals
empty mind
crooked fingers
jagged teeth
tearing hair
kicking feet
screaming lungs
gasping breathe
silver blade
crimson blood
snapping bones
flaying skin
slicing muscle
throbbing pain
crying eyes
broken heart
fleeing love
me alone.
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MDodgen
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2004-06-09 10:54:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Me Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:58:32 AM AEST (User
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wow, that was a great poem, great style and wonderful flow
pixie xx |
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Re: Me Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:37:08 AM AEST (User
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This is absolutely extraordinary. Exact... powerful... dramatic... uncluttered and yet full. Wow. I am completely knocked over by it. Incredible! |
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