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I Can Remember Marching
Contributed by
scottbuttross
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:30:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I can remember marching
in the ranks of another time
Heart taken
By a loyalty that binds
All purpose was clear
This wisdom was mine.
But when I lost this cadence
I found myself blind.
A cadence was heard
One of no fear
It brought us together
And forever was clear
Lead by a voice
Heard by all near
My cadence was born
March on level
From here.
This boot was worn
A metrical foot
Taken to front
From where I stood
Dress and cover
Was always the same
A parallel life
From where I came
Front and center
Eyes look ahead
My futures unseen
Caught in Murphy’s bed
Instill these dreams
Forever they taught
subsist within
A step I once sought.
Rank of another
Tangent dreams diminish
It is true for all things old
This cadence would finish
Recollect for wisdom
Loyalty grows cold
If only to remember
Of the purpose it told.
-Scott E Buttross
Copyright ©2004 Scott E Buttross
Copyright ©
scottbuttross
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2004-06-09 10:30:07]
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Re: I Can Remember Marching
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:57:49 PM AEST
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| a really good poem - quite ambigious at times - loving the march feel to the writing and the style of writing. well done!! |
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Re: I Can Remember Marching
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by buchi on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:46:31 PM AEST
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| Parallel life...yes...poem unfolds ...well done |
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Re: I Can Remember Marching
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by candysears on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 07:36:00 PM AEST
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You wrote this well..It unfolds as you write each stanza...Very good...
I enjoyed this write...
God Bless!
C.S |
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