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More than words could say

Contributed by sweetansexy on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:28:18 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I sat on your lap
Looked in your eyes
The sense of hurt
Was yet a surprise
You were so happy
I was so young
I didn’t understand
That your life was now done

I sat on your lap
Looked in your eyes
The feeling of strength
Was yet a surprise
You were so weak
Yet so strong
It was hard to believe
That soon you’d be gone

I sat on your lap
Looked in you eyes
The sense of love
Was not a surprise
You are now gone
Yet your still here
You always told me
That you will always be near

I sat by your grave
Looked at the stone
Why you are gone
Is still left unknown

I used to blame god
For taking you from me
I was too young to understand
And to hurt to see

I realize now
That god is not to blame
For taking you away
And causing such pain!

I miss you grandpa
Each and every day
And Ill always love you
More than these words
Could ever say.

Copyright Â© sweetansexy ... [ 2004-06-09 10:28:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: More than words could say (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:32:14 AM AEST
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I'm almost in tears here, wow such a powerful poem from someone so young, ((((HUGS)))) to you and your daughter...

pixie xx

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