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light or dark
Contributed by
hot_topic
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Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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the sun is so bright
with a whole bunch of light
could this be right?
if my world is so dark...
how could there be light in my life....?
with the clouds that thunder
and the lightning that strikes,
of one breath, that its gone like that.
fire that burns
and ice that freezes.
will i ever learn,
ppl always say.
the fire inside of me that burns......
just let it be light
or let it be dark
of the sun that is so bright.
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Re: light or dark
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by Chicken on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 09:16:32 AM AEST
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| interesting.... |
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Re: light or dark
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by S_K_Williamson on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 05:05:41 PM AEST
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I think you must be your own worst critic. I find the writes I have read to be good.
Keep up the good work,
Sharon;) |
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Re: light or dark
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by krissy26 on
Monday, 17th October 2011 @ 11:09:10 AM AEST
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| I understand what you mean haha I have a few poems like that. |
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