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Missing you more each day
Contributed by
sweetansexy
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Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 08:31:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Everyday I miss you
Everyday I cry
Everyday I look above
And ask the good Lord why?
So many things have happened
Since you were taken away
I wish that I could tell you
I would have so much to say.
My heart it has been broken
Like it never will again
You were more than just my father
You were also my best friend
I sometimes think I see you
Sitting in your chair
And then I look again
And I see that your not there
I miss you every moment
Of each and every day
If I had the chance to talk to you
Here are the things that I would say
Thank you for the time you spent taking care of me
Thank you for the times you let me sit upon your knee
Thank you for loving me even when you were mad
Thank you for correcting me the times that I was bad
Thank you for teaching me all the things Id need to know
Thank you for letting me make mistakes so that I could grow
There’s so much more Id like to say that you will never hear
Just know this dear daddy, in my heart Ill keep you near
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sweetansexy
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Re: Missing you more each day
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by freespirit on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 08:45:24 AM AEST
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I like your poem as long as you keep the memories read my poem called dreams
my grandaughter has a locket that
she keps close to her heart when she's sad
she opens it and can feel the love he placed inside it You father is never far away from
you remember to talk to him and always remember the good times
God Bless |
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Re: Missing you more each day
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by SAT on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 09:22:37 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this. My dad and I, we don't get along. You should be happy that you had a father that was actually a father. My dad is like a little kid with a temper, and it gets me really mad at times. I should be thankful though. Im lucky I have a father, and I hope that you keep him close to your heart, and never let him escape your soul.
Luv
~Alicia Marie~
~SAT~ |
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Re: Missing you more each day
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:30:13 AM AEST
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Awww I am so sorry that you lost your Dad, you write about it so beauitfully tho, can feel your sadness and pain in your words, he is smiling down on you, brought a tear to my eye, trully beautiful
Takecare and hugs
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Re: Missing you more each day
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:40:26 PM AEST
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Your poem brought tears to my eyes...How hard it must be to lose a parent.I've lost a friend and I found pieces of myself inside your poetry.Like you,sometimes I see a girl on the street and just turn around and realize it's not her and it's so very hard...I'm really sorry for your dad and I hope the pain will soothe itself,but please remember that the bond shared soul to soul is the strongest bond ever and nothing can break it.I'm sure your father is watching over you and has heard all of these things you wanted to share with him.God bless,
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Re: Missing you more each day
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by SAT on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 08:47:27 PM AEST
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hey. i just stumbled accross this poem again. every time i read it, i almost cry. I'm so sorry about your dad, and i hope that you never forget him.
~*~Alicia Marie~*~
*~*SAT*~* |
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