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Never Let Your Secrets Show

Contributed by liquidchaos on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 08:04:25 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

never let your secrets show.
keep your thoughts to yourself.
roll down your sleeves
pray that no one ever sees.
never tell your friends.
they'd never understand.
live a double life.
wake up and put on your facade.
pretend to be like them
and fake yet another smile.
tell them that you're OK
while you bleed to death inside.
make up petty rhymes
to cope with the unreal.
blend with your surroundings
to avoid the endless struggle
for control of life that isn't yours
since you don't want it anyways.
they've taken everything.
all that you used to stay alive.
so let your soul disintegrate
but still don't let them see.
till slowly you become a hollow shell.

Copyright © liquidchaos ... [ 2004-06-09 08:04:25]
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Re: Never Let Your Secrets Show (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:59:13 PM AEST
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that would have been perfect advice to me, if i'd heard it about three or four months ago. it proberly would have saved me from alot of grief.
oh well, i can't erase my past.

hey!!! this one's pretty good! kep it up.

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