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My heart, it’s lost somewhere
Contributed by
bhav
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:20:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Mr’s Bee sorry to disturb you in your nectar collecting process
but have you seen my heart it’s lost somewhere?
“No dear bhavik, but don’t worry I will spread the buzz about it.”
“Hi! There Mr. Rose, wow you look lovely this morning”
“Thanks bhavik”
Have you seen my heart it’s lost somewhere?
“No dear bhavik, its just early morning I was too busy opening my petals
to keep a watch elsewhere.”
“Hi! There Mr. Sun you are shining bright today.”
Have you seen my heart it’s lost somewhere?
“Bhavik from high up in the sky things on earth look like ants to me,
so how can I find your little heart?”
“Hi! There cute little puppy what are you doing here alone?”
“Where is your mother?
By the way have you seen my heart it’s lost somewhere?”
“Wow, Wow, Wow dear bhavik I was busy lapping up milk,
I haven’t seen you heart.”
“Hi! There Mr. Breeze you are flowing very pleasantly today.”
“Have you seen my heart it’s lost somewhere?”
“Bhavik, I haven’t,
but as I keep moving I will surely look out for your heart.”
Day turns to night,
Finally I ask Mr. Moon ”Have you seen my heart it’s lost somewhere?”
“Bhavik dear, I have seen it throbbing and walking across
to the one you love the most.”
“You love her so much,
that you heart decided it should go to her.”
“Your heart is not lost,
it’s with your loved one,
go to your loved one you will find it there.”
Copyright ©
bhav
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2004-06-09 06:20:26]
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Re: My heart, it’s lost somewhere
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:48:38 AM AEST
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| Very cute and sweet. I think the topic of lost hearts is a bit mature for chilldren's poetry, but you captured a sweet essence. |
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Re: My heart, it’s lost somewhere
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by bhav on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 12:53:04 PM AEST
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mjgrl5...
Thanks for reading and liking my poem....Bhav |
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