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A Song For I----
Contributed by
Demile
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:55:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The clock strikes twelve, the wind blows
The door slams, the thorny rose grows
I wake up to find that you're not there
I tried to feel for you, but I don't dare
I'm only dreaming, as I smell the empty air
Alone I was before I knew you
Alone again now, it's nothing new
This song is for you, I sing it
The memory we shared, I love it
It hurts to know that it's over
I'm crying for you, my lost lover
God made The Beginning
He also made The End
It's hard to understand why
We're part of His "great" plan
I will spread my charred wings and fly
To a faraway place, as time goes by
'Cause I want to forget our loveful days
If I can't gaze at your beautiful face
And dwell upon your forgotten ways
Copyright ©
Demile
... [
2004-06-09 01:55:48]
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Re: A Song For I----
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 02:44:12 AM AEST
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Superbly told! This is one of the class of "excellent" in the love poems on this site. Well done!
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Re: A Song For I----
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 02:54:54 AM AEST
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wow this is incredible it touches the soul
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Re: A Song For I----
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:37:50 AM AEST
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Yes, I like this, you held on to your emotion, and made it very readable.
Great flow, and imagery. I loved the charred wings!
nice work |
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