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broken
Contributed by
HellsLibrarian
on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:40:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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bruised, broken
tattered, torn
ripped and
shredded
care worn
tear leaks
blood seeps
reddened eye
halting sigh
to blame
feel shame
at fault
rubbing salt
raw wound
guilt consumed
weary mind
cannot find
resting place
shadowed face
rent open
bruised, broken
Copyright ©
HellsLibrarian
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2004-06-08 22:40:17]
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Re: broken
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:43:45 PM AEST
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| This was fresh and clever. Nice use of language tgive this a stark and quick pace. |
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Re: broken
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by thumper on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:21:08 AM AEST
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This poem spoke volumes without a lot of excess words. Very nicely done. It read very well, very smooth. Peace to you.
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Re: broken
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:24:32 PM AEST
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