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Purple Sorrow
Contributed by
carebear
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Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:57:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She sits-her heart in her own hands
Think blood falls to the floor filling in her shame
With a single tears sliding down her cheek she cries
Feeling like she is out of place-no longer fits.
He who broke her heart-ripped it in shreds
Made her fall in to a hole of despair-she is unaware
Swallowing down the lump in her throat hiding loneliness
Memories crawl all over room,on her bed,in her head-turning weak.
Purple petals fall from the sky-sorrow sinks in
Her hazel eyes glazed over with hatred and sin
Stars twinkle shoot across the sky-wishes are falling
Broken promises scattered all over the floor-he's out the door.
She longs to drown in the purple rain
Wanting to heal this suffering of aching strife
Trust wilting all over the table-leaving stains
Betrayal was his last resort-his final words
Copyright ©
carebear
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2004-06-08 21:57:15]
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Re: Purple Sorrow
(User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:31:43 PM AEST
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This is such a deeply moving poem but there are still spelling and grammatical errors that may take away from this. I want this to be read so have the moderators edit and repost. It is such good work!!!
Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Purple Sorrow
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:30:32 PM AEST
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| wow...I didnt think that purple could be used to identify sorrow, crimson is normally used. So this makes your poem unique. The frustration, utter misery and sadness you potrayed so well. A very moving write. |
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Re: Purple Sorrow
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 12:27:55 PM AEST
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as I already told you this was amazing. I liked the - that you used kind of broke up the poem, but made it a more unique poem because of that.
Bobo (Joel) |
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