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Depths of Suicide
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:34:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Depths of Suicide
It's gripping me
From underneath
Within me
New feelings
Have emerged
To make me realize
That I love life
No one can take that away
From me in spite
Of my past hate for it
No one can take that away
Only I can take that away
I realized tonight
That I love life
I don't know why
It's only right
That I accept this
In my own time
I was brought down by strife
And therefor hated life
Emotions can control
With a suffocating hold
You can feel bliss and more
Or fall to never reached depths before
If I would have known this sooner
I would have remembered
That no amount of strife
Can lessen my love of life
Unless I let it
I cannot commit suicide
I know where my heart lies
Embedded with this love of life
The persistence to fight strife
Till I'm meant to die
I reached the depths of suicide
Only to burn and rise
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Re: Depths of Suicide
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by hawaii06 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:41:52 PM AEST
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muy bueno pero muy triste (Bery good but very sad-Spanish) Keep on writing...You;ll make it..I love the perspective of this poem...Great Write
Auf Wiedersehen (Goodye-German) |
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Re: Depths of Suicide
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:13:32 PM AEST
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a most excellent write! i see the vision of you rising and burning as bright as the golden sun.
the voice
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Re: Depths of Suicide
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by waos on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:11:54 PM AEST
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i love the end..."i reached the depths of suicide only to burn and rise"
that's awesome |
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Re: Depths of Suicide
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by jaavys on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:49:30 PM AEST
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| i see you write sad, think happy thoughts, life is tough enough. i invite you to read a few of mine; Schizo and the statue. |
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