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Just Say Goodbye
Contributed by
Joker17
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Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:37:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Working hard outside today
It was ninety-one degrees
Sweat was burning in my eyes
And so were the memories.
But thoughts of you gave energy
To make it to day’s end
And then I said to myself
“How much more can I pretend?”
I think you’re already gone
I think you’re gonna move on.
I don’t see you making time
Don’t think you wanna be mine.
I don’t sense you wanna try
It’s really what you do imply
And I don’t wanna wonder why
Just say it...Just Say Goodbye.
I’ve already done all I can
Only one thing left to see
If I make myself disappear
Then would you be missing me?
Would you wonder where I was?
And want me like before?
Could it make you want me back?
I just can’t wonder anymore.
‘Cause I think you’re already gone
I think you’re moving on.
You won’t share a little time
Don’t think you’ll change your mind.
I don’t believe you’ll even try
I can see it in your eyes
And I just can’t wonder why
Please say it...Just Say Goodbye.
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Joker17
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2004-06-08 19:37:04]
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Re: Just Say Goodbye
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:50:14 PM AEST
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Sweat was burning in my eyes
And so were the memories.
I loved those two lines. I really liked this poem its a hard realization to come to and I have also had to make that decision, but sometimes its best to give some ppl space. Once again I hope everything works out for you.
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Re: Just Say Goodbye
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:59:28 PM AEST
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Quite a torment of uncertainty you are in. Keep tough. But more than that, keep in mind that all these events are shaped by a Hand with a bigger plan. You are not forgotten, and wisdom is to be found in everything that comes your way.
Remember strength only comes through seeing the tough times.
Take care.
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Re: Just Say Goodbye
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by apollo on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:24:05 PM AEST
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| that is so sad. seriously im a guy and i know guys are not supposed to cry, but this was emotional. very hard to take, for i think at one time or another we all feel this way, it is tragic to hear of yours. hang in there, don't do anything crazy now, there are people here for you. |
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Re: Just Say Goodbye
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by carmen_queasy on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 06:35:38 AM AEST
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| I love this poem, it's so sad. |
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