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Never waking up
Contributed by
cheech
on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:19:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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one nigh going to bed
***** keep going through my head
i live in a shed
nothings better than being dead
god must hate me
he doesn't want me to know
he doesn't want me to be
he wants me to go
going to bed one night
i fight and fight
and try to make things right
all i see is the bright light
i'm going to bed
never waking up
i'm finally dead
***** going through my head
i hate sleepiong in this bed
never waking up
i'm dead and i don't care
life is finally fare,cuz
i'm dead,never waking up
i must go to sleep and never wake up
tired of this life i lead
tired of bleeding all night
tired of searching for the knight
death to me by me,not sure what
happened,i was joyful,now
everything has turned around
now i feel down but i'm
loven this
never waking up
never waking up
never waking up
never waking up
i'm dead,now free to do whatever
i want,i'm gonna have life better
forever,no more ***** going
through my head
never waking up
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cheech
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2004-06-08 18:19:35]
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Re: Never waking up
(User Rating: 1 )
by VanHaggar on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:55:50 PM AEST
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| I think you're a little dramatic.life can never be that *****in bad.Live in my shoes. Try to look at the brighter side of things instead of the negative all the time that seems to be the real THE ANTHEM instead of getting upset when given advice don't take it as a personal attack take it as someone actually cares.If we didn't care we wouldn't say *****. The poems are all excellently written but you gotta quit being so negative and enjoy your lige your life's way too *****in' short |
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Re: Never waking up
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by BrandySwanson on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:06:14 AM AEST
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sad write but you have expressed your true emotions well.I know where your coming from i feel the same way at times just want to go to sleep and never wake up.
huggs,Brandy |
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