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Darker Days
Contributed by
mdmorash
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Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:11:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Falling farther than I thought,
Never learning what’s been taught.
Begging for a quick goodbye,
Feeling now my soul untie.
Visions flailing, all of you.
Mem’ries showing you’re not true.
Searching for what I can’t find,
To this world myself I bind.
Touch the darkness all around,
Here beneath the open ground.
To the sun I hope and pray,
Never seen the light of day.
What you took I can’t replace,
All that’s left I now misplace.
Is there nothing that I’ve done,
That will not soon be undone?
Though I try I can’t escape,
Lost within this battered cape.
Torn away by waves of pain,
Slowly slipping, am I sane?
Mocking eyes you hold me down,
Upon my head a jesters’ crown.
Falling for the words you say,
Losing all the games you play.
Beaten now I wander lost,
Nothing gained at such a cost.
No direction no restraint,
Stiffly mired in complaint.
Know this now I won’t give up,
Though on my soul you tend to sup.
All the pain you’ve given me,
Opened up my eyes to see.
Now I know the really you,
All your lies have now come true.
Though I know I can’t break free,
So the you will now be me.
Locked within this vicious realm,
Round and round to overwhelm.
Where’s the author to these plays?
Curtain call on darker days.
Michael David Morash
Copyright © 2004
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mdmorash
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2004-06-08 17:11:48]
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Re: Darker Days
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:17:02 PM AEST
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I liked this work, and some of the language use is terrific. It started to feel a little like American Pie, where you wish it would end on one of it's many strong notes. I think it would improve if you shortened it up a bit.
American Pie is a classic however, so this is just a humble opinoin.
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Re: Darker Days
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:24:02 PM AEST
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I think this was a powerful, emotional, wrote filled with suck great strong feeling...I enjoyed it very mcu so...lol I loved it...great write keep it up keep it coming...
read and comment my stuff if you want...I'd love to hear what you think...if you want...
much love,
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Re: Darker Days
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by eatfresh22 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:37:36 PM AEST
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Wow! That was great. Great flow! Sad, and a little hopeless, but a good read nonetheless. I like your stuff.
~Carrie~ |
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