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My Natural Calm
Contributed by
Ina
on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:05:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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For months
I have bled
when laying down to sleep
like a gutted fish
in a sinking boat
I have felt the cold wind
beating like a hammer
against my flesh
I have ran through
stone hallways
with pieces of your brain
nailed to my ankles
I have slept on wet mattresses
like an abandoned baby
I have collected rotten promises
like sacred sea pearls
I have drowned myself
in Calm Teas and drugs
I’ve always felt unwanted
I’ve always been a dirty little girl
With you
But
before my emotional coma
suspended me in hell
I found
Him…
hiding in the pages of my diary
and now I no longer
drink Calm Teas
instead I curl up on my couch
and drink his mind
Copyright ©
Ina
... [
2004-06-08 17:05:14]
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Re: My Natural Calm
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:10:08 PM AEST
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| oh wow ina...i love this...i love every word you write. i just think you are an amazing talent and i thank you for sharing your gift* |
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Re: My Natural Calm
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:00:44 PM AEST
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I Like this one . Nice write
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Re: My Natural Calm
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by brigitte7735 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:16:30 PM AEST
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Omg.....this is priceless
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Re: My Natural Calm
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by bj111 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 09:56:53 AM AEST
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| Very good. Found ur use of images stark (,gutted fish, brain nailed to ankles, rotten promises) and different (emotional coma, Calm Teas, drink his mind). Well done. Keep writing...bob |
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