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A Silent Last Breath
Contributed by
SheDevil13317
on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 02:38:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A Tattered Rose,
A Tattered Fate,
I placed my hand upon the gate,
Wondering where I should go,
Knowing I'm always late.
I utter a word,
For the thrid time around,
Repeating this word,
Hoping it won't be heard.
I fell to the ground,
Hoping happiness is found,
But the heavens reveal,
That I am not forgiven,
Then I know,
I'm living a sin.
"My love, I'll come,
I'll rise to their challenge."
I said, and I promised,
I released me from myself.
I shall wither and die,
Just as a rose may lay,
Tattered.
The pain overloaded,
Through the quick strike,
Of the knife,
I fell to this world,
With a silent,
Last Breath...
Copyright ©
SheDevil13317
... [
2004-06-08 14:38:52]
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Re: A Silent Last Breath
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:48:48 PM AEST
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| very tragic, i liked it! good job! |
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Re: A Silent Last Breath
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by SheDevil13317 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:27:04 PM AEST
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| Thank ya much ^_^, it's the first time i did a poem in this cati :) |
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Re: A Silent Last Breath
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:02:18 PM AEST
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Good write.
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