|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Euphoria
Contributed by
Demile
on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 02:18:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
|
Afore the mild rays of the sun
Cosset the leaves of a tree
Cadences of merriment so young
Birds expressing beatifically
Envisage an aerial voyage
A graceful spirit of the air
The glowing divinity never ages
She glows like a candle so fair
Under the dark fathomless waves
The solitary siren cantilates
Her voice of doom echoes in caves
She bestows the love she hates
The scions of the forbearing God
In euphoria they extol His name
With eyes of love, they hate not
Forgive my soul, devote with grace
Copyright ©
Demile
... [
2004-06-08 14:18:59]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Euphoria
(User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 02:47:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow, very very very powerful, great words are used in this to show so much emotion, I loved it so much thats why I voted it a 5...!!! lol great write keep it up keep it coming...
read and comment mine is if you want...I'd love to hear what you think...
much love,
Dani |
|
|
Re: Euphoria
(User Rating: 1 )
by sweetansexy on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 02:59:00 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Great Poem. I really liked this! Keep up the goof work!! |
|
|
Re: Euphoria
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:14:04 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I am usually harping about beefing up the language in poems, but I think this one goes a little overboard. I would suggest that the poem would be more powerful if you toned down the language.
I appreciate the effort, and am impressed with your vocabulary |
|
|
Re: Euphoria
(User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:34:42 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Beautiful poem. Great write. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
