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Discontentment
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 01:33:35 PM in AEST
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They all think you are so perfected,
but I know who you really are...
I know that you cry
when all alone.
I cannot judge this, I'm just like you,
I cry the same way as you do,
staring into the ice in my broken mirror,
I've started to live on the other side...
I am so close to leaving
the room
without saying goodbye.
Would you notice? Would you ask: 'Is someone missing?'
You would not cry for my not being present,
you forgot me a long time ago,
now I know
how insignificant I am.
Once again I feel the pain, because I am a worrier...
I shall pack my bags and leave,
with no mutterings of discontentment.
In my eyes I am, always will be,
and always have been...
free.
No longer will I feel this pain,
because I am a warrior.
Copyright ©
broken-glass
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2004-06-08 13:33:35]
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Re: Discontentment
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 01:45:35 PM AEST
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wow, all I can say is Bravo and 5/5
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Re: Discontentment
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by dolly_dagger on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:52:12 PM AEST
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| i'll notice... |
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Re: Discontentment
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by jade_elephant on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 05:38:08 PM AEST
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| yeh me too xxx |
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Re: Discontentment
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by BrandySwanson on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:43:26 AM AEST
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this was really a great read.
huggs,Brandy |
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