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Single Soul Death
Contributed by
LiLTor878
on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 01:32:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She waits until night,
Before she raises the knife,
She wants to see the light,
For in her life there is so much darkness,
So much danger,
So much pain,
She wants to regain,
Her life,
She wants to go somewhere where nightmares will never haunt her again,
And dreams, will never leave,
So, she soundlessly slits her throat,
Falls to the ground,
Eyes peacefully closing,
Knowing, she will finally see the light.
She will never hurt again,
She, will finally be,
Free.
Copyright ©
LiLTor878
... [
2004-06-08 13:32:37]
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Re: Single Soul Death
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by Avila on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 01:36:22 PM AEST
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| a lil depressing but over all it's great i hate commenting on peep's poems co's no one can really judge anybody else's poetry but good job |
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Re: Single Soul Death
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 01:38:01 PM AEST
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Very emotional and expretly written, 5/5
pixie xx |
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Re: Single Soul Death
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by DirtyFool on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 02:21:33 PM AEST
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| Wow very nice write and very depressing |
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