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Tough Love
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 12:02:03 PM in AEST
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They say the hardest tasks are the most worthwhile,
But when the odds are stacked against you it is hard to smile,
Love is supposed to conquer all,
But it is such a struggle getting over all these brick walls.
Constant spanners are being thrown into the works,
This beautiful love is being tainted with all the hurt,
And the pain that is a main ingredient in their relationship,
What is happening here is much more than just a blip.
I would hate to see these two go their separate ways,
Together they should be living out all of their days,
I know that love has it’s ups and downs,
This partnership has had more than it’s fair share of frowns.
They are two souls who should be as one,
Sharing all the laughter and all the fun,
To see you together is such a magical thing,
Watching the warmth and the joy to one another you bring.
Please hold on and don’t give up,
I know that your true love is more than enough,
To keep you together as a wonderful double act,
One day I would love to witness your marriage pact.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-08 12:02:03]
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Re: Tough Love
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by willow_tara72002 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 01:39:28 PM AEST
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I can understand how its hard to be in a relationship with all the things you have to face, and how it will fall apart if your not in it together.. good poem
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Re: Tough Love
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by sweetansexy on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 03:13:22 PM AEST
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| This is a sweet poem. Its great that you care so much for your friends to write this for them. Great Job!!! |
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Re: Tough Love
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:05:06 AM AEST
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Lovely sweet meaningful poem that caries great power and is very touching.
Beautiful Write.
Corinna |
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Re: Tough Love
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by abie05 on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:55:25 PM AEST
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| hmmm ... i like it ... i can relate to it dats wat happened to me n my ex ... but der was no happy ending for us ... i hope ur friends will do better ... and make it against all odds =) |
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