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darkness my old friend
Contributed by
Naughtygurl
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Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 12:00:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A shadow apears in my doorway.
With a sheirk It flys toward my bed.
With no time to think I remember those words
once again , here it is... "Hello darkness my old friend"!
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Naughtygurl
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2004-06-08 12:00:43]
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Re: darkness my old friend
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by Britty on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 12:03:19 PM AEST
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wow!! amazing
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Re: darkness my old friend
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 12:07:23 PM AEST
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Dark and nice and short
pixie xx |
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Re: darkness my old friend
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 12:23:48 PM AEST
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"Hello Darkness, my old friend
I've come to talk with you again...."
Sometimes we come up with poweful lines that unfortunately are so powerful that we rememeber where we heard them before and it spoils the poem.
I like the tight imagery.
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Re: darkness my old friend
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:34:20 PM AEST
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| Damn!!! this gave me chills at the end, excellent excellent work. |
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