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Basha
Contributed by
Ina
on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:26:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A boy with a screaming tattoo
smokes his yellow stained paper
and chases rabbits
around the university
his name is Basha
and he crawled
on his Hercules knees from a jail in
Amsterdam
to experience
a college degree
like me
he doesn’t know yet but
this world will cheat on him
and all the rabbits will die
in his arms
Basha
is an idiot savant
and his talent is biology
and memorizing airline schedules
Basha doesn’t understand the world
and I like that he cant understand me…
So me and Basha lay here in the sun with rabbits gnawing at our minds
Copyright ©
Ina
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2004-06-08 11:26:31]
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Re: Basha
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 12:04:23 PM AEST
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| yeah i love this...it's very interesting...love the way you write... |
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Re: Basha
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 12:43:08 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this poem. I would like it better without the last line-or an edited one. i think the ending was more powerful without it. Nice job |
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Re: Basha
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by buchi on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 06:13:16 PM AEST
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| Very descriptive poem indeed.. well done.. Basha inspired yu to write... |
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