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Silent Solitude
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:09:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Are the frolicking idiots
still here?
Disrupting my
silent private chambers.
Intolerable noise and ruckus
bombarding my
fragile mind.
I'll be happy when
they lie
cold and still,
forever silent on my floors.
There is one place
the savages cannot invade.
My mind.
They would not dare,
they do not know the shadows that
lurk within my
morbid mind.
I block them out with
sweet, sweet solitude.
Blast them out with
their own fears.
Escape them,
sit in a corner and
let the darkness hug me,
taking me away.
Allow the decay
whisk me away,
Forever free in my
desolate grave.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-06-08 11:09:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Silent Solitude
(User Rating: 1 ) by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:34:26 AM AEST (User
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beautiful...sad...
Escape them,
sit in a corner and
let the darkness hug me,
taking me away.
those lines are amazing... |
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Re: Silent Solitude
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 12:31:48 PM AEST (User
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Another great poem, 5/5
pixie xx |
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Re: Silent Solitude
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:12:17 PM AEST (User
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Wow , ya sound totaly bummed out. Tough day eh? Good choice of words in this piece. Nice work.
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Re: Silent Solitude
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:06:49 AM AEST (User
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I like. You did a good job here. |
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