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Make Love to Me
Contributed by
sweetansexy
on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:31:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Make love to me
Hold me so tight
Feeling your passion
All through the night
Make love to me
Soft gentle moans
Slowly increase
To passionate groans
Make love to me
My heart skips a beat
Lost in this world
Of passion and heat
Make love to me
A feeling of bliss
Passion is growing
with one little kiss
Make love to me
Bodies on fire
Every touch
filled with desire
Make love to me
Glistening and wet
Passion is growing
But not quiet there yet
Make love to me
Bodies move faster
Seeking and searching
For what you are after
Make love to me
I start to explode
Feeling the orgasms
Begin to unfold
Make love to me
Two bodies one soul
Feelings of love
That makes us whole
Copyright ©
sweetansexy
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2004-06-08 08:31:26]
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Re: Make Love to Me
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by Black13 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:39:35 AM AEST
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You didn't go overboard with it. :P
That is a good thing. I find myself editing them sometimes...
Good write.
Very nicely done.
Well put into written word and a nice flow. |
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Re: Make Love to Me
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:40:38 AM AEST
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| wonderful poem...you did a great job on this one |
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Re: Make Love to Me
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by Lady-D13 on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 05:47:49 PM AEST
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| This is the best love poem that I have heard. It's beautiful. I love it. I can feel the passion of this poem that the author felt. It's excellent. |
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Re: Make Love to Me
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:23:44 AM AEST
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I can feel the passion in this one
Wonderful write
steve |
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Re: Make Love to Me
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:11:47 AM AEST
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Good Job, Nice Write. Oh the power of love and the passion in ones soul and how you beautifully portrayed it all. Very nice.
Corinna |
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