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3rd Dimension of Love
Contributed by
InexactExactness
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Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 07:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Three dimensions in the third power
makes nine times the number
of the pedals on a flower
One is for the love
that I need from you
the others are the goodbyes
from the feelings that you knew
Your heart to me is but a gift
that you can't give up to me
I pleed and I beg but to no avail
since your eyes, they cannot see
Now I leave with sad goodbyes
and there's nothing for me left
The one pedal that I wanted most
is hidden among the rest
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2002-10-15 07:15:00]
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Re: 3rd Dimension of Love
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by nebill on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 10:25:45 AM AEST
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| I like it! Expresses an emotion a lot of folks have had! |
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Re: 3rd Dimension of Love
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 03:26:21 PM AEST
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Heart of burning silence it blows not which way comes...but know that pedals turn black with shame and regret inside them turns....sad...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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